Reading aurther miller's intro to his plays makes me re-think the way i handled the train (maoist mata hari). Perhaps as raj suggested i built up a promise that is never delivered; on the other hand, she says, she felt cheated.
I wonder now if i shouldn't revisit it, add another act and allow a more natural conclusion. This will allow me to develop the stakes more clearly for the woman in red and the woman with her kids. Bring the terror to the door and reveal its fangs which we have been so blithely ignoring for so long. The reason behind the shift in the maoists principle of targeting only the offical force and killing the innocent travelers was precisely to awaken the complacent masses to their cause. Bring the struggle home, to every home, until we all sit up and take notice.
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